DISQUS

Elixir · 4 years ago

lol not self descriptive is it??
n yeah buzy hunting...i love this place man!!!

Pallavi · 4 years ago

yeah right.. they are organized alright.. I think that its all those parking guys who seem to have lost their income with a stroke of the govt's rule... Sometimes I wonder how they would feed their family and are they the ones who have resorted to this crime.. They have a huge network and they know all the schedules... who better than them and I sympathise with them.. totally.. imagine.. a genre of people left in the streets suddenly.. SIGH..

Deez · 4 years ago

ther too are organized......:-O
no wonder, ther are doing so well!

Angel · 4 years ago

Hmmmmm...nice take on the human side of criminals....I love your stories man :)

manuscrypts · 4 years ago

elixir: er..uhoh that was supposed to be a secret..lol


pallavi: thats quite a good theory..

manuscrypts · 4 years ago

vanilla: a possibility :)


angel: yup, sometimes i like them too :)

erratica · 4 years ago

to be honest, i didnt get the story *confused look* either the usual suspense element was not there or i failed to spot it

sqrl/NT · 4 years ago

I didnt get it either :|...is this an exclusively Bangalore thing?

manuscrypts · 4 years ago

erratica: check out the last para, read it a lil more carefully..:) u shd get it..


sqrl/nt: though its written keeping in mind something specifically happening here, it is still a stand alone story... like i said, read the para, esp the last line a lil more carefully..:)

GratisGab · 4 years ago

hai re manu...!!! scary...now why're you writing such dark stuff..? *suspicious look*

erratica · 4 years ago

i got it! i got it! how dumb of me, *sheepish grin* i shud hv read the last para more carefully. nice story with your trademark twist in the tale

pearl · 4 years ago

The ending was a surprise. All through you led me into believing, it was a story about BPO s !

manuscrypts · 4 years ago

gratis gab: things ar pretty scary in bangalore... all i did was add a twist.. :).. besides, with the final star wars movie coming out, i am also giving vent to my 'dark side' ;)...


erratica: :)

Stone · 4 years ago

Very true...they r much better-organized now a days!

manuscrypts · 4 years ago

pearl: that was the idea :)


stone: u havent said unfortunately!!...lol

Grafxgurl · 4 years ago

hey dropped in to say hi... hope your doing fine!


very clever writing!!!

coolcat · 4 years ago

didnt get the crime manu ... :-/

manuscrypts · 4 years ago

hey grafxgurl :)


coolcat: the first para??

Anonymous · 4 years ago

Godfather bangaluru ishyle?
austere

garfy · 4 years ago

I am sssssooooooo sure i posted a comment here yesterday! Where is it? :((


Or was I stoned? :(

manuscrypts · 4 years ago

austere: doubt if it is as romantic as that..lol


garfy: i think its the latter :p